Tomorrow I will go away #writetribeproblogger #writebravely


Today on the first day of #writetribeproblogger,  I wish to write about the  feelings of an unborn girl child.

The unborn girl child comes to know that she would  be aborted the next day . These must be  the feelings inside her heart which she wants to convey to her mother .


Tomorrow , I will go away

Mom, My heart beats for you and yours for me . We have developed a great bond  in these five months . I can feel you . But tomorrow I will go away .

Mom, You know I am just like you , I am a girl with brown eyes and black hair , But tomorrow I will go away.

Mom, When you place your hand on your belly and  try to feel me,  cuddle me , I feel so blessed . Mom, please bless me today for the last time , because tomorrow I will go away.

Mom, When you sing for me , the music soothes me.  Mom, please sing a song for me today  for the last time, because tomorrow I will go away .

Mom, I have been waiting for the day I would be in your arms and you would actually hug me .  Mom, please hug me  tight in your arms today though virtually, because tomorrow I will go away.

Mom, When you cried today in the ultrasound room, I also cried . I didn’t like that man who talked  so rude to you.  I  cannot see you crying . My dear  Mom, please  give me a big smile  today, because  tomorrow I will go away.

Mom, I love to move my head and stretch my legs inside you. I know it hurts you when I kick you with my legs and fingers . But please Mom, bear my kicks for the last day  today  because tomorrow I will go away.

Mom, I am sorry if I have hurt you  in any way . Please forgive me for the last time today,because tomorrow I will go away.

Mom,  I am scared of that big instrument that would be used on me .  I am scared that it would hurt you even more. Mom, please bear this pain bcoz of me for the last time .  Tomorrow I will go away.

Mom, I relish  the taste of your favourite pink icecream. Please  can we enjoy  it together today for the last time ,because tomorrow I will go away.

Mom,  I feel so upset  of going away from you.  I wish you could keep me forever with you. I love you a  lot.  I am surely going to miss you. Please say ” I love you, I miss you ” for the last time, because tomorrow I will go away.

I am participating in Writetribe #writetribeproblogger challenge October 2017

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Hi, I am Monika, an educationist for the last 17 years and a mom to a daughter for the last 11 years . Give me a hot cup of masala tea with some snacks plus a laptop and I am happy ! My Blog is a mixed bag of my observations ,learnings and experiences . To me , life is love, life is helping & learning from each other. Life is not that complex -We just have to stop overthinking .

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16 Responses

  1. Parul Thakur says:

    Oh no! that was hard-hitting 🙁 makes me sad about things people do to have a boy baby.

  2. Vinitha says:

    Monika, this was so touching. I couldn’t help but cry.

  3. Obsessivemom says:

    Oh this is heartbreaking. I wish the mom had the courage to say No.

  4. Nidhi GS says:

    It’s heart-wrenching…. can not read more

  5. Rashmi says:

    Oh this is so heartbreaking Monika…I wish she didn’t have to go away…

  6. Nupur says:

    I read with moist eyes and the tears just flowed. Beautifully written

  7. Alice Gerard says:

    What a sad story. I am sorry that the baby will be gone. Her words were very moving.

  8. This was such beautifully written post. It made me cry!

  9. Anchal says:

    Brought me to tears. Moms are so precious.

  10. Sulekha says:

    Monika, I felt so helpless reading the little girl’s thoughts. The pain of a mother and the agony of the child are beautifully expressed in your post. WOW

  11. Oh God Monika, I could not read it in a go…so so heart wrenching.

  12. Anita says:

    Mother child bond is the great feeling .But the world around is so cruel to force the trauma .

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