Smooth & Shiny #fictionwriting #fridayfotofiction


#FridayFotoFiction is a weekly blog hop which celebrates fiction writing based on the photo prompt.


The memories of the past are revived. Her life had  not  been as smooth as those  smooth legs . Her Mom & Dad’s marriage was an intercaste love marriage . Everybody was resistant. Even God behaved unsympathetic and took away her Dad, just before sending her on this earth . Her Mom fostered her all alone , facing many strains of the harsh society .

The life had not been shiny as those stylish  shiny shoes. She wanted to achieve high in studies but couldn’t even continue her school for long.

But today , she is a successful model.  With the smooth legs in those shiny shoes , she is now able to well maintain the balance in her life , just like those high heels.
The shine has started coming back in her Mom’s eyes too.
Linking this post with Mayuri and Tina Basu


Hi, I am Monika, an educationist for the last 17 years and a mom to a daughter for the last 11 years . Give me a hot cup of masala tea with some snacks plus a laptop and I am happy ! My Blog is a mixed bag of my observations ,learnings and experiences . To me , life is love, life is helping & learning from each other. Life is not that complex -We just have to stop overthinking .

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4 Responses

  1. Good one Monika!
    Good to see that in the end the heels bring the balance and shimmer brings sparks in life of two ladies who had struggled a lot!

  2. Anita says:

    Nice end at last . God exist .Have faith .

  3. Loved how smoothly life worked out for them in the end too. Lovely take , Monika.
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

  4. Tina Basu says:

    Good to see that her life finally has found the shine and smoothness. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction

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